1. William Dean Howells- I talk of dreams
2. I believe the writer used a vivid description to describe the first paragraph. BUT it is mostly my own dreams I talk of, and that will somewhat excuse me for talking of dreams at all. Everyone knows how delightful the dreams are that one dreams one’s self, and how insipid the dreams of others are. I had an illustration of the fact, not many evenings ago, when a company of us got telling dreams. I had by far the best dreams of any; to be quite frank, mine were the only dreams worth listening to; they were richly imaginative, delicately fantastic, exquisitely whimsical, and humorous in the last degree; and I wondered that when the rest could have listened to them they were always eager to cut in with some silly, senseless, tasteless thing that made me sorry and ashamed for them. I shall not be going too far if I say that it was on their part the grossest betrayal of vanity that I ever witnessed.
3.But the egotism of some people concerning their dreams is almost incredible
4. The writer speaks about how egotistic persons talk about their dreams and the vanity it produces. He then goes on to talk about his dreams about school and God , Adam and Eve. The whole story was a confusing one at that so I did not fully understand the whole concept that the writer was trying to produce. He jumped around from subject to subject and , like a dream was not clear and cannot remember what he was talking about by the end of the essay.
5. I am rather proud of that dream; it is really my battlehorse among dreams, and I think I will ride away on it. The author used a quotation to finish his story.
6. The conclusion was like the story, very confusing and tough to decifer for anyone reading this. I tried to take my time to understand what he was trying to point out but its very complex for me. For exampl this was said:"Then, suddenly, I was not consul at Venice, and had not been, but consul at Delhi, in India; and the distress I felt would all end in a splendid Oriental phantasmagory of elephants and native princes, with their retinues in procession, which I suppose was mostly out of my reading of De Quincey. This dream, with no variation that I can recall, persisted till I broke it up by saying, in the morning after it had recurred, that I had dreamed that dream again; and so it began to fade away, coming less and less frequently, and at last ceasing altogether.
Monday, November 24, 2008
First three essays- Edward Sandford Martin- The Tyranny of Things
1. Edward Sandford Martin- The Tyranny of Things
2. The writer uses an anecdote to tell his story. For example,
A TRAVELER newly returned from the Pacific Ocean tells pleasant stories of the Patagonians. As the steamer he was in was passing through Magellan’s Straits some natives came out to her in boats. They wore no clothes at all, though there was snow in the air.
3. To many of us, groaning under the oppression of modern conveniences, it seems lamentably meddlesome to undermine the simplicity of such people, and enervate them with the luxuries of civilization. To be able to sleep out-o-doors, and go naked, and take sea-baths on wintry days with impunity, would seem a most alluring emancipation. No rent to pay, no tailor, no plumber, no newspaper to be read on pain of getting behind the times; no regularity in anything, not even meals; nothing to do except to find food, and no expense for undertakers or physicians, even if we fail; what a fine, untrammeled life it would be!
4. Yes I believe that the introductory paragraph was effective for the reader because of the value of background and general information it provided to the reader. Again imagery was used to provide a good visual to the reader so as for that person to become hooked in the story.
5. The writer gives out a suggestion for his conclusion.
6. The conclusion was effective in my opinion. The last paragraph summerized what the writer was trying to get across and helped his work with the strong summerization of his totality of his essay. Charming and likeable as they are, and good to know, it must be admitted that there is a superior convenience about associating most of the time with people who want to do about what we want to do at about the same time, and whose abilities to do what they wish approximate to ours. It is not so much a matter of persons as of times and means. You cannot make your opportunities concur with the opportunities of people whose incomes are ten times greater than yours. When you play together it is at a sacrifice, and one which you have to make. Solomon was right. To associate with very rich people involves sacrifices. You cannot even be rich yourself without expense, and you may just as well give over trying. Count it, then, among the costs of a considerable income that in enlarging the range of your sports it inevitably contracts the circle of those who will find it profitable to share them.
2. The writer uses an anecdote to tell his story. For example,
A TRAVELER newly returned from the Pacific Ocean tells pleasant stories of the Patagonians. As the steamer he was in was passing through Magellan’s Straits some natives came out to her in boats. They wore no clothes at all, though there was snow in the air.
3. To many of us, groaning under the oppression of modern conveniences, it seems lamentably meddlesome to undermine the simplicity of such people, and enervate them with the luxuries of civilization. To be able to sleep out-o-doors, and go naked, and take sea-baths on wintry days with impunity, would seem a most alluring emancipation. No rent to pay, no tailor, no plumber, no newspaper to be read on pain of getting behind the times; no regularity in anything, not even meals; nothing to do except to find food, and no expense for undertakers or physicians, even if we fail; what a fine, untrammeled life it would be!
4. Yes I believe that the introductory paragraph was effective for the reader because of the value of background and general information it provided to the reader. Again imagery was used to provide a good visual to the reader so as for that person to become hooked in the story.
5. The writer gives out a suggestion for his conclusion.
6. The conclusion was effective in my opinion. The last paragraph summerized what the writer was trying to get across and helped his work with the strong summerization of his totality of his essay. Charming and likeable as they are, and good to know, it must be admitted that there is a superior convenience about associating most of the time with people who want to do about what we want to do at about the same time, and whose abilities to do what they wish approximate to ours. It is not so much a matter of persons as of times and means. You cannot make your opportunities concur with the opportunities of people whose incomes are ten times greater than yours. When you play together it is at a sacrifice, and one which you have to make. Solomon was right. To associate with very rich people involves sacrifices. You cannot even be rich yourself without expense, and you may just as well give over trying. Count it, then, among the costs of a considerable income that in enlarging the range of your sports it inevitably contracts the circle of those who will find it profitable to share them.
First three essays- Theodore Roosevelt-Dante and the Bowery
1. Dante and the Bowery by Theodore Roosevelt.
2. The Author used the general or historical background information to illustrate to the reader of the difference of the past and present."It must be the Florentine market-place of the thirteenth century—not Fulton Market of to-day. What infinite use Dante would have made of the Bowery!" and "The nineteenth century was more apt than the thirteenth to boast of itself as being the greatest of the centuries; but, save as regards purely material objects, ranging from locomotives to bank buildings, it did not wholly believe in its boasting", are examples given.
3."A thirteenth-century poet was not in the least troubled by any such misgivings, and quite simply illustrated his point by allusions to any character in history or romance, ancient or contemporary, that happened to occur to him". The author is trying to catch the reader into believing the differences of 13th century poets and 19 century poets.
4. The begining of the first paragraph had a lot of imagery that would help capture the reader so that he or she can become more interested in the story. It is important that the author set up ealry and often to capture the reader, if not, the reader will become bored and will not be of interest to the person.
5. The author used suggestion to conclude the paragraph. "Dante’s masterpiece is one of the supreme works of art that the ages have witnessed; but he would have been the last to wish that it should be treated only as a work of art, or worshiped only for art’s sake, without reference to the dread lessons it teaches mankind".
6. The conclusion was a bit short but clear and concise words for the reader. One age expresses itself naturally in a form that would be unnatural, and therefore undesirable, in another age. We do not express ourselves nowadays in epics at all; and we keep the emotions aroused in us by what is good or evil in the men of the present in a totally different compartment from that which holds our emotions concerning what was good or evil in the men of the past.
2. The Author used the general or historical background information to illustrate to the reader of the difference of the past and present."It must be the Florentine market-place of the thirteenth century—not Fulton Market of to-day. What infinite use Dante would have made of the Bowery!" and "The nineteenth century was more apt than the thirteenth to boast of itself as being the greatest of the centuries; but, save as regards purely material objects, ranging from locomotives to bank buildings, it did not wholly believe in its boasting", are examples given.
3."A thirteenth-century poet was not in the least troubled by any such misgivings, and quite simply illustrated his point by allusions to any character in history or romance, ancient or contemporary, that happened to occur to him". The author is trying to catch the reader into believing the differences of 13th century poets and 19 century poets.
4. The begining of the first paragraph had a lot of imagery that would help capture the reader so that he or she can become more interested in the story. It is important that the author set up ealry and often to capture the reader, if not, the reader will become bored and will not be of interest to the person.
5. The author used suggestion to conclude the paragraph. "Dante’s masterpiece is one of the supreme works of art that the ages have witnessed; but he would have been the last to wish that it should be treated only as a work of art, or worshiped only for art’s sake, without reference to the dread lessons it teaches mankind".
6. The conclusion was a bit short but clear and concise words for the reader. One age expresses itself naturally in a form that would be unnatural, and therefore undesirable, in another age. We do not express ourselves nowadays in epics at all; and we keep the emotions aroused in us by what is good or evil in the men of the present in a totally different compartment from that which holds our emotions concerning what was good or evil in the men of the past.
First three essays- Number one- Edgar Allen Poe
1. The Philosophy of Composition by Edgar Allen Poe
2. The writer used quotes for the introductory paragraph. The first part of the essay used this quote:"By the way, are you aware that Godwin wrote his Caleb Williams backwards? He first involved his hero in a web of difficulties, forming the second volume, and then, for the first, cast about him for some mode of accounting for what had been done.”
3. There is a radical error, I think, in the usual mode of constructing a story. Either history affords a thesis—or one is suggested by an incident of the day—or, at best, the author sets himself to work in the combination of striking events to form merely the basis of his narrative—designing, generally, to fill in with description, dialogue, or autorial comment, whatever crevices of fact, or action, may, from page to page, render themselves apparent.
4. The introduction was effective in the sense that it helped set the mode of the rest of the essay from the begining. If you start out strong in your paragraph from the principle words, then you can create a more effective and interesting story for your reader.
5. A quotation is used for this material. Out of four possible methods he choose to use quotations to finish out his essay
6. The use of quotations at the end of a essay could help or hurt you. In most cases it will probably help you out because it solidifies your essay and gives the reader an understanding of the story. It is a bit difficult to try to get your whole paragraph to describe itself in one quote.
2. The writer used quotes for the introductory paragraph. The first part of the essay used this quote:"By the way, are you aware that Godwin wrote his Caleb Williams backwards? He first involved his hero in a web of difficulties, forming the second volume, and then, for the first, cast about him for some mode of accounting for what had been done.”
3. There is a radical error, I think, in the usual mode of constructing a story. Either history affords a thesis—or one is suggested by an incident of the day—or, at best, the author sets himself to work in the combination of striking events to form merely the basis of his narrative—designing, generally, to fill in with description, dialogue, or autorial comment, whatever crevices of fact, or action, may, from page to page, render themselves apparent.
4. The introduction was effective in the sense that it helped set the mode of the rest of the essay from the begining. If you start out strong in your paragraph from the principle words, then you can create a more effective and interesting story for your reader.
5. A quotation is used for this material. Out of four possible methods he choose to use quotations to finish out his essay
6. The use of quotations at the end of a essay could help or hurt you. In most cases it will probably help you out because it solidifies your essay and gives the reader an understanding of the story. It is a bit difficult to try to get your whole paragraph to describe itself in one quote.
Wednesday, November 19, 2008
Five word of the week
1.Bitch-a female dog- That Bitch is a good breed.
2.Lucid Dream-a dream state in which one is conscious enough to recognize that one is in the dream state and which stays in one's memory- The other night I had a Lucid Dream that felt almost too real.
3.Holy Grail-Grail A cup or plate that, according to medieval legend, was used by Jesus at the Last Supper and that later became the object of many chivalrous quests. - Jesus served his diciples in a Holy Grail
4.Purgatory-a condition or place in which the souls of those dying penitent are purified from venial sins, or undergo the temporal punishment that, after the guilt of mortal sin has been remitted, still remains to be endured by the sinner.- Not having a job and having a lot of bills feels like being in Purgatory.
5.Prophet-A person who speaks by divine inspiration or as the interpreter through whom the will of a god is expressed- Joan of Arc claimed to be a Prophet of God, but was burned when no one believed her.
2.Lucid Dream-a dream state in which one is conscious enough to recognize that one is in the dream state and which stays in one's memory- The other night I had a Lucid Dream that felt almost too real.
3.Holy Grail-Grail A cup or plate that, according to medieval legend, was used by Jesus at the Last Supper and that later became the object of many chivalrous quests. - Jesus served his diciples in a Holy Grail
4.Purgatory-a condition or place in which the souls of those dying penitent are purified from venial sins, or undergo the temporal punishment that, after the guilt of mortal sin has been remitted, still remains to be endured by the sinner.- Not having a job and having a lot of bills feels like being in Purgatory.
5.Prophet-A person who speaks by divine inspiration or as the interpreter through whom the will of a god is expressed- Joan of Arc claimed to be a Prophet of God, but was burned when no one believed her.
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Annoying
I thought most of the articles were annoying because I just didnt like the information it had to give me. I think I already read or heard most of the material that was on the article. I have nothing to input at this time but I really dont have nothing much to say but it is annoying
1. Plethora-overabundance; excess: a plethora of advice and a paucity of assistance.- The USA has a plethora of food.
2. latulence- generating gas in the alimentary canal, as food.- That man had a lot of flatulence
3. Imp- a little devil or demon; an evil spirit- That child is a little Imp
4. Quantum- a large quantity; bulk.- Costco has a quantum of food in thier store.
5. C0nsigliere- a member of a criminal organization or syndicate who serves as an adviser to the leader.- In the movie "The Godfather" the role of consigliere was played by Robert Duvall, or "Tom" in the movie, he was an advisor for the crime family of Corleone
2. latulence- generating gas in the alimentary canal, as food.- That man had a lot of flatulence
3. Imp- a little devil or demon; an evil spirit- That child is a little Imp
4. Quantum- a large quantity; bulk.- Costco has a quantum of food in thier store.
5. C0nsigliere- a member of a criminal organization or syndicate who serves as an adviser to the leader.- In the movie "The Godfather" the role of consigliere was played by Robert Duvall, or "Tom" in the movie, he was an advisor for the crime family of Corleone
Thursday, November 6, 2008
Should Animals be experimented on?
I belive that it is important that we do test on animals because it can help out a lot of people one day. People have experimented on baby humans, and the results were disturbing and terrible. I really think animals were put here so we can learn from them and I believe we have, from every animal at that. So in my opinion I dont think its wrong to experiment so we can learn more about mankind and how we could improve the future.
1.Maliciously- She Maliciously killed that man/full of, characterized by, or showing malice; malevolent; spiteful
2.Misanthropy- I wish everyone would die/hatred, dislike, or distrust of humankind.
3.Prefects- The Prefect caught me smoking weed in class/A student monitor or officer, especially in a private school
4.Psychosis- I believe that had coke psychosis because he did things that normal humans would not otherwise do/a mental disorder characterized by symptoms, such as delusions or hallucinations, that indicate impaired contact with reality/any severe form of mental disorder, as schizophrenia or paranoia.
5.Schizophrenia- Because the man would suffer from delusions of a six foot bunny rabbit hidding in his closet, the psychiatrist believed this man had schizophrenia/a severe mental disorder characterized by some, but not necessarily all, of the following features: emotional blunting, intellectual deterioration, social isolation, disorganized speech and behavior, delusions, and hallucinations.
2.Misanthropy- I wish everyone would die/hatred, dislike, or distrust of humankind.
3.Prefects- The Prefect caught me smoking weed in class/A student monitor or officer, especially in a private school
4.Psychosis- I believe that had coke psychosis because he did things that normal humans would not otherwise do/a mental disorder characterized by symptoms, such as delusions or hallucinations, that indicate impaired contact with reality/any severe form of mental disorder, as schizophrenia or paranoia.
5.Schizophrenia- Because the man would suffer from delusions of a six foot bunny rabbit hidding in his closet, the psychiatrist believed this man had schizophrenia/a severe mental disorder characterized by some, but not necessarily all, of the following features: emotional blunting, intellectual deterioration, social isolation, disorganized speech and behavior, delusions, and hallucinations.
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
Obama Speech
Barrack Obama was speaking to all Americans last night about his thoughts on his victory. He metioned that he wants to bring everyone together and bring forth a greater cause then what minor issues seperate us today. Obama said he wants everyone to be seen as an "American" because we live in America and not because of our backgrounds and cultures. The speech included a snipet of what he plans to do with the war, he basically said this war cannot go on for another year. Obama was also greatful that his opposition, John McCain, congratulated him in his victory and wished him succes. The past and the future were hot topics in his speech saying that the US is greatful for those who died for us in Iraq will never be forgotten. But most importantly, he kept his word in his speech, he is to bring forth a change in a nation that has never been the same since Bill Clinton was impeached in 2000.
Page 32 Practice 6
For Practice 6, section A: Emphatic order
Section B: Time order
Section C: Space order
Practice 7:
1. Emphatic order
2.Emphatic order
3.Emphatic and Time order
4.Emphatic
5.Emphatic
6.Emphatic
7.Time
8.Emphatic
9.Time
10.Time
Section B: Time order
Section C: Space order
Practice 7:
1. Emphatic order
2.Emphatic order
3.Emphatic and Time order
4.Emphatic
5.Emphatic
6.Emphatic
7.Time
8.Emphatic
9.Time
10.Time
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
MY MIND
Today in this world of low economy and years of war, we try to see what went wrong, so may we try to fix the wrongs and mistakes we have comitted. I look back and think how did George W Bush was elected twice and not only lead us to a war under false pretenses, but stole an election. How does this corruption take place without any punishment. I know if that was me in a regular everyday setting, I would have been prosecuted with numerous counts of offenses that could put me away for a few lifetimes. Today, we tend to let the bad guy get away because of money, and the nature of the presidents actions were irresponsible and evil. Now karma is a back stabber and always comes in the time of dire need, so I am not so worried about the outcome cause everyone gets what they deserve. I want to take this time to say that a lot of the politics have so much corruption today and I dont know how it goes on without any actions taking place. They had no problem impeaching president Clinton but as soon as the seat was available, they took it so fast that the ink didnt even dry from his impeachment. So Bush goes to work and start to tear this country a new crap hole. So thats that
Thursday, October 23, 2008
Sharing emotions
Liking For the other person-- 4
Love for the other person--6
Anger with the other person--9
Disappointment with other person-7
Liking for a third person-6
Anger toward a third person--5
Anger toward yourself-- 10
Dissappointment to yourself--10
Embarassment--8
Your fears--5
Enthusiasm-5
Prode-5
Uncertainty-8
I didnt learn anything new or exciting
Love for the other person--6
Anger with the other person--9
Disappointment with other person-7
Liking for a third person-6
Anger toward a third person--5
Anger toward yourself-- 10
Dissappointment to yourself--10
Embarassment--8
Your fears--5
Enthusiasm-5
Prode-5
Uncertainty-8
I didnt learn anything new or exciting
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
What model of behavior do I show
I use the competition model because I hate to lose and I like winning regardless of the other people. Its a Dog eat dog world and the bigger dog gets the bone. Its all about survival. On the other hand I would like to use the collaboration method so that others can when as I win myself. Other than that I wish only for myself
Wednesday, October 8, 2008
My listening
Yesterday we did a personality test and I scored a low of 38. I know i listen more than that but the test showed otherwise i think i was rushing through the process
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
Tuesday, September 30, 2008
My test Results
According to this test, you have a reasonably high level of self-esteem. There is, however, still some room for improvement.
In order to care about others or love another person, you must first love yourself and build your self esteem. The person you view as yourself may differ from another persons point of view. You cant expect people to understand you and love you for who you are when you alone cant figure out yourself. In order to do that, you must build your level of self-esteem and find out who you are and how you are compatible with other human beings.
In order to care about others or love another person, you must first love yourself and build your self esteem. The person you view as yourself may differ from another persons point of view. You cant expect people to understand you and love you for who you are when you alone cant figure out yourself. In order to do that, you must build your level of self-esteem and find out who you are and how you are compatible with other human beings.
Wednesday, September 24, 2008
Update to the last blog
I dont think that person should bother me much longer. The person shouldnt have said those atrocious word that would only be said to hurt an individuals feelings. I used to care but as you get older and more experienced, you tend not to give a damn about certain people. I may have lost the war between the person but I have heart enough to go out fighting because thats what I am instilled to do. I have always succeded in everything I have ever set my mind to and this battle might have been lost in the short term, but long term gain. It might be a long time before i can win my war against the person but my goal is to just win, overall.
My speech is going to be about my expectations for this classroom. I need to sharpen my skills in public speech, something I have been lacking for a while. In the line of work in my field, employees are required to speak in a group of people because of the much needed tool of communication amoungst police officers. Its absolutely vital that I learn and get confortable with speaking with many people at once and to get to the level where I dont studder or hear the sound of my voice cracking or treambling. I leave off with a sample of my work for you and you will hear more Manana!!!
MR. Galvez
My speech is going to be about my expectations for this classroom. I need to sharpen my skills in public speech, something I have been lacking for a while. In the line of work in my field, employees are required to speak in a group of people because of the much needed tool of communication amoungst police officers. Its absolutely vital that I learn and get confortable with speaking with many people at once and to get to the level where I dont studder or hear the sound of my voice cracking or treambling. I leave off with a sample of my work for you and you will hear more Manana!!!
MR. Galvez
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
Mr.Galvez
welcome to the mind of Mr. Galvez . This is an intro to my hard work and future discussions of topics off all sorts stay tuned!!! 9-23-08
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